Monday, 25 June 2018

Sharks

The shark's skin is slippery and slimy. 
It's a giant, great white.
It's teeth are shiny and sharp like a dinosaur, eyes as black as space. Water splashing out of deep, blue ocean.
The tail longer then a ruler, fins as grey as lint out of a pencil.
I wonder why its splashing out of the water? I think it may be catching its prey.
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous17 September 2018 at 19:39

    I really like your shark writing because I like the bit when you said the skin is slippery and slimy . By Libby

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